Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors / Snippet Sunday! And Happy Holiday, if you celebrate! I personally, don’t, I’m waiting for Bealtaine!
I had a hard time choosing a snippet this week because I wanted to continue sharing my serial killer story, but then I wrote this intro to a new story that I really want to share, but I think I’m going to wait on that. So, we will continue on with Dennis…
This time she wore white bra top with rhinestones covering it, and a matching pair of stretchy short shorts with open toed platform heels. Her dance was a routine with the stripper pole. Her shorts came off first, slowly as a tease. She revealed matching white rhinestone thongs underneath. She slid them half way past her butt and turned around facing away from her audience as she slid them the rest of the way down. Out one leg and then the other. Her closest audience of wealthy frat boys cheering. She danced around the pole more.
“TAKE IT OFF!!” The one with blonde hair yelled.
Serena waved her her finger and mouthed, you have to wait, smiling. She looked over at me, her smile faded. She was already annoyed by them and knew how the rest of the night was going to go.
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I could visualize the scene from your vivid description!
Thank you ; )
Curious as to whether the night will go the same as always, or if something else will happen…
We shall see…
Thanks for reading!
I wonder if Dennis is jealous enough to hurt those frat boys? This story could go so many ways. 🙂 Great writing, Danni!
Don’t you love it when a new story pops into your mind–and the urge to write it is overwhelming?
oh my gosh yes! This new story just kinda came to me and I took off writing it, although I know I need to finish writing this serial killer one…I never finish anything…I’m over 15k words into the serial killer one. Ugh
The scene is very vivid. I could picture it all.
I’m wondering what else will happen.
Thanks for reading! I tried to comment on yours the last two weeks and kept getting an error, but I love the snippets you are sharing!
Great snippet, so vivid.
I’m really enjoying the dynamic between Dennis and Serena. Also, the new look for the blog is very striking.
You might want to consider sharing your snippets with MFRW Book Hooks as well. They’re another great group of aspiring authors and I think they would enjoy your content. http://mfrwbookhooks.blogspot.com/
I was also a frequent participant in their sister blog, MFRW Steam, last year, but my erotica writing has fallen by the wayside a bit. I know that they would appreciate more participants. https://mfrwsteam.blogspot.com/
Thank you so much!
I will definitely check out those blogs!
I’m a huge Batman fan, so I was just feeling this blog and the domain was available, so that was my sign to just do it. I’m sooo happy with it!
I enjoy your poetry, I would love to read your erotica writing!!