
Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors / Snippet Sunday! And welcome to my new blog!! We’ll see how this goes. I wanted to try not posting on Blogger.
Okay, so those following my snippets on Blogger…which I think is most of you because this is for WeWriWa, we are going to continue on with my serial killer story where we last left off. The comments on my last snippet were fantastic by the way, so thank you!
She always would mention how this club was a step up from all the others she had worked at. This club was shit and the owners treated her like shit, I didn’t understand why she stayed, she was beautiful enough and talented enough to work one of L.A.’s bigger clubs. She would get paid a lot more at one of the prestigious fully nude clubs. I hoped that if she changed clubs, she would at least tell me, so I could follow her there, I didn’t care if it meant paying her more.
I never understood why she took to me the way she did, I wasn’t handsome or thin or rich. I was a mechanic that grew up in the middle of the desert. I was a thirty-five year old with a beer gut that walked funny. All I did was work on cars and go to the strip club. She had the potential to be anything.
I waited in line at the now busy bar, and got another drink before Serena took to the stage. I expected her to be in the same outfit she wore for the lap dance, but she had changed again.
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~Danii X
This snippet reveals a lot about both characters, but also leaves me with questions. Well done!
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Oh, he’s sounding more and more stalker-ish! Great description f him, by the way. It gave a strong visual. I am worried for her unless safety is the reason she stays at this particular strip club.
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Good details and you really make me wonder about her and why she does stay at this one place. Great snippet.
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Lots of information in the few lines. Interesting snippet.
And nice new website !
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